An animation review blog from the 2010 Gobelins Animation Summer School class.
Swing, 4th pass from Ryan D on Vimeo.
Ryan! Now he really uses the force of the swing! I like it a lot /I love it, really :)/Just one question. Are you sure it is 8 milimeters on the first keyframe of the pendulum? ;) If not, I would definitely change that! You dont want your work to look unprofesional! :)
Hey Ryan,well i love where this has arrived love the little leg anticipation in the start and all the little changes of the swings:)The ending has become so awesome 5 stars on that!I only have 2 comments for you so here we go:1)At the first jump i still feel he is a bit soft on the timing of the jump at one specific place,to be more exact at the extreme up point of the jump it feels a bit slow i understand off course that cause of gravity he is slowing cause after that he will start falling but still it looks to slow at that point like he is staying a bit too long on the extreme up.2)The hook up still feels unnatural somehow i wish i could say why but i can't really feel it cause i can't try that move myself or see a videoref so maybe do a 2d animatic with stick figure to quickly experiment on different poses on that to see how it can become more natural and fluid.Sorry not much help on that but still i feel something is off in comparison to the quality of the rest of the assignment.Thats all brother.Have a good one.