tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6603497437877119981.post7154456270064818031..comments2010-09-22T06:34:03.769-07:00Comments on Five Liters of Boxed Wine: New version of the swingRyan Dhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15368248055790360205noreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6603497437877119981.post-39472474789067858242010-08-08T02:47:36.188-07:002010-08-08T02:47:36.188-07:00Hey Ryan!
This is looking good man i love the nega...Hey Ryan!<br />This is looking good man i love the negative space and silhouette changes even thought i now it is always a pain changing camera angle and love the little reversal of the torso from side to side as he jumps up and lands.<br />Still think as he lands the timing is a bit too soft i think its mostly the spacing, if at the up point of the jump you stretch the torso just a bit more than you will gain 2 things 1)as he lands it will feel snappier and 2) more dynamic pose wise at the up point of the jump.<br />Also as he jumps up there is a pop in his right leg.<br />There is still something wrong about the way he falls and hooks i wish i could frame by frame this to see better but for sure one thing is his hall body is rotating in z to the right at the same time and looks stiff,i think you did that so he has a diagonal angle and thats giving him more force to move after he grabs the stick thing but its not working well its very hard to rotate in air like that i think it would be better to have very little rotation as he falls in the torso,let gravity pull him down and after he hooks you can play with that.<br />After that as he grabs with the right hand his right foot moves up together at the same time spacing wise.<br />Watch out as he swings from hand to hand his head seems to pop in a few places like translating back and forth to fast mostly at the end of second 5 and start of second 6.<br />I agree with the guys about the last jump just before he lets go and a little as he lets go its soft there.<br />That's all for now Ryan love the changes man its defenetly getting there.<br />Like always just some ideas take what you like:)<br />Take care.Nikolashttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08340942246563385874noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6603497437877119981.post-45128197064437035562010-08-07T14:04:06.225-07:002010-08-07T14:04:06.225-07:00I've watched it like 10 times trying to find s...I've watched it like 10 times trying to find something that bother me, I think it is the fact that the initial jump to start swinging is way too difficult even for a professional gymnastic; when he jumps I think he should hang strongly to feel his weight, and then push with his legs to start swinging; I think the first jump is good, the swing is good,the final jump I agree with Rodrigo he feels a bit light; but to me it's definitely the way he starts swinging that throws me off; I hope I am making sense, anyway, this is just how I see it.<br />_DiegoDiegoFerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06193679978005525227noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6603497437877119981.post-34583477350270563732010-08-06T17:32:48.234-07:002010-08-06T17:32:48.234-07:00HAA!!
I always smile during the final frames! =D
...HAA!!<br />I always smile during the final frames! =D <br /><br />In my opinion is really better! <br />I feel that you could explore more acceleration and deseleration during the swing... faster as he is down, ease-out while reaching the top, etc.<br /><br />on the last swing, before letting go of the rope, he feels really light!Rodrigo Abadhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17965504250471905853noreply@blogger.com